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Friday, March 6, 2009

My Poetic Accent #4::i would have come back.......

Well this time some Hindi poem written by me for all of you.i have written this poem one year before when i was in a very dejected condition and again for the last 20 days same is happening with me.Feeling alone in this big big big world(though i have almost everything fine)...............................

बंजर जमीन पर खिल उठती हरियाली,
थोडा खून पसीना तो किया होता|
मैं आ जाता वापिस होने को तुम्हारा,
इक बार दिल से बुलाया तो होता||

टूटने को होता नहीं दिल,
एक कोना पर दुखता तो है|
नहीं आते आँखों मैं आंसू,
गला पर फिर भी भरता तो है||
हो न सके आसमां-ओ-जमीं के हम,
लेकिन दिल में अपने समाया तो होता|
मैं लौट आता वापिस होने को तुम्हारा,

इक बार दिल से बुलाया तो होता||

नादान सागर मैं उठी दुःख की लहरें,
पतवार कहीं मेरी खो गई|
पास मैं आया तुम्हारे जितना,
दूरियाँ बढती उतनी गई||
थाम लेते हम लहरों को भी,
कश्ती में अपनी बिठाया तो होता|
मैं लौट आता वापिस होने को तुम्हारा,
इक बार दिल से बुलाया तो होता||

लौट आऊंगा फिर मैं बसंत में,
वादियाँ बहार फिर हो जाएँगी|
पर वो कली अभी लाऊं कहाँ से,
कभी जो चमन में आयेगी||
कारवां बसंत पतझड़ न बनता,
गर बागबाँ ने दगा दिया न होता|
मैं आ जाता वापिस होने को तुम्हारा,
इक बार दिल से बुलाया तो होता||

(March 5th, 2008)

And below is the TRANSLATED English version of the poem for my all non-Hindi readers.Please comment all positive-negative point(s) if any in the translation(as i am bad with English grammar.):



Green would have yielded on drought,
if some blood had sweated out.
I would have come back to you,
once if you had called from your spirit.

Heart is not meant for breakage,
but some corner still feels hurt.
No tear comes outside eyes,
but still there is throat puree.
Neither sky no earth was for me,
couldn’t you try beneath me in heart.
I would have come back to you,
once if you had called from your spirit.


Immature sea got gloomy waves,
got lost somewhere Helm of mine.

The more I come closer to you,
distances were more and more grown.

We would have taken hold on the waves,
if I had gotten a seat on your boat.
I would have come back to you,
once if you had called from your spirit.

Then I will return in the spring,
green waves will be out again.
But where I get that buddy at moment,
which will come after you in my square?
Spring would not have transpired the autumn,
if gardener had not cheated me.
I would have come back to you,
once if you had called from your spirit.


(March 5th,2009)

9 comments:

PULKIT said...

gr8 poetry again param,
this is it! along reding ur blog for about 4 months regularly now, i had discovered that poetry is ur jonoure, go for it!
speciallize in it! and for that u need bigger exposures...i know that ur on poethunter, but thats not it, go for as many forums on websites and communities on networking sites to showcase ur poetries, may u get succeess and become professionally paid for it some day!
god bless!

regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

paramveer said...

@pulkit thx for appreciating me so much....i really need it.

Hannah Grace said...

wow I like it...very deep!
Hope you start feeling better soon, I have often found that I feel alone sometimes as well, the trick is that we never really are (even when we feel like it, God is always there ;)

Keep up the great work!

paramveer said...

@hannah thx dear for supporting words.

jitendersaini said...

great poem.... carry on..

paramveer said...

@jitender
thx chachu!! its my pleasure to get appreciation frm u....LOL

Ekam said...

Great! You can be a very good poet.
God bless you:)

Cuckoo said...

Nice lines and good emotions. Have you read my poetry ?

I too write both in Hindi and English. :-)

P.S.- Can you pls enable the Name/URL option for commenting ? This blogger id will take you to my old blog.

Below is my current url.
Cuckoo

ajay rai said...

good job dude , i like ur work

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