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Tuesday, March 10, 2009

My Poetic Accent#5:NIGHT DAYDREAMER

Every night I remain lonely, thou,
Every night these distances collide.
Every night I feel the new bond.
Every night we hang on phone line.
Every night I propose you.
Every night you agree to.
Every night I feel your aroma.
Every night I feel new breath.
Every night I get under your arms.
Every night I finger your hairs.
Every night nose touches your dimple.
Every night I feel your lips.
Every night I kiss your eyes.
Every night I sense your heartbeats.
Every night I bestow you my worship.
Every night I give you my life.
Every night we get hands in hands.
Every night we spend together.
Every night we fall in fresh devotion.
Every night I feel same wind of love.
Every night I feel you crawling.
Every night your grace becomes my bed.
Every night I do not “dead to the world”.
Every night I coz, become “daydreamer”.

15 comments:

paramveer said...

it happens for not many time that i write sthing within small time....it takes me 2-3 days smtimes to make a simple poem. yet this time this verse was made last midnight just within 30 minute's thinking process.
wish u will like it.

distinctly yours,
PARAM

jitendersaini said...

Nice Poem Jony... really quick thinking ... carry on..

Anurag said...

nice fantasy bro.. "daydreaming" at night seems a good idea :)

Brian said...

The poem is well done. Very interesting stuff. Keep up the good work.

paramveer said...

@jitender thx for giving sm time here frm ur busy schedule...wish to get ur shadow here again...i really need it...LOL

paramveer said...

@ anurag.....is it really gr8!?!?!...thx bro for saying so.

paramveer said...

@ brian..thx sir for ur appreciation and sparing time here...wish 2 c u again.

Landscapeideas Team said...

very thoughtful...
keep up

paramveer said...

@landscapeideas
thx visit again

PULKIT said...

hey param, good one again, not as complicated as ur other posts of poetic ascent but this one was a decent one too!
The pic's resulution can be changed brother! seems the pixels are getting split so update it to a shorter size version! regards
god bless

PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

bharatheeyam said...

nice picture.http://bharatheyam.blogspot.com

paramveer said...

@pulkit.....
i ws also thinking the same about pic........but then i thought y nt use sm unclear pic as we all see in dreams..........
if my logic is wrong then plz tell me

thx for criticism...i lv this
@all
plz say something against my work.i'l love to read -ve pts more than +ve 1s.

@bharatheeyam
thx

Kiran Bhairannavar said...

WE Day Dream and these keep us going with a controlled passion unlike the night ones which at times topple us from bed.

Nice poem...well written and an interesting read.

paramveer said...

@kiran u r right bro with 50% exceptions......:)
thx for taking some stopover here.
hope to c u again :)

the pink orchid said...

lovely lines there :)