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Thursday, March 19, 2009

My Poetic Accent#6:CRUEL GOD

Cruel God!
Making soil barren;
Cleaning good beings;

Civilizing merciless barbers.

Wild God!
Drinking red blood;

Enjoying on our suffers;
Denying making life painless.

Selfish God!
Exporting the poison;
Excluding the valid juices;
Dishonoring the holy ground.

Pessimist God!
Breaking his own house;
Killing his personal populace;
Still not confessing be disruptive.


Low God!
Arrogant on his convictions;
without including any knowledge;
Telling divine beings are mediocre;

Misguided God!
Making noises with guns;
Without listening underneath;
Receiving tragical end........

I am not at all dishonoring God in any way but sorry to say that many evil POWERS are just alive today because they use the name of holy God!!!!

11 comments:

paramveer said...

@all
due to getting a very short time for blogging due to studies in these days i m just writing some GARBAGE lines from my diary....hope u all will like them still.

still i hope soon i'l post some useful information too.

LOVE U ALL
DISTINCTLY YOURZ
PARAMVEER
(paramveer@ymail.com paramveersaini@gmail.com)

Hannah Grace said...

Param..I like this, its very honest.
Your right I think there are a lot of misconceptions about who God is.

I totally understand being busy w/ school hope you get to relax soon.

HannahGrace

paramveer said...

@hannah....thx miss.

Anurag said...

very honest and audacious indeed bro.. although i do feel the whole perception must change in some other 'frame of mind'.

paramveer said...

@ anurag
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......

Femin Susan said...

Don't tell God as selfish....

paramveer said...

@Femin Susan
welcome back on my blog.

BTW I M NOT SAYING THE HOLY GOD SELFISH MAM!!.......

Here word God is used for those all ppl who are using relegions for their own business.... ......specially that all terrorists and so called saints(btw not all saints.)

WISH I AM NOT HURTING ANYONE'S FEELING WITH MY WORDS..........

Shalki Sharma said...

well done param...
There are so many people quarreling with each other under the name of God...
All the best!

paramveer said...

@shalki
so finally some1 is here who understanded the verse.......:) :)
thx for "all the best" sis.

Ekam said...

Even I was confused for a bit, but after reading your last line, it cleared. Very nice Param. You are getting better day by day.Keep writing. God bless you:)

paramveer said...

@ekam.thx for saying me better than b4.....:)