In my lonely house,
Somethings still reside.
All your letters burning,
Laying near my dead body
Which is silently living.
All your deep memories
Inside a frozen heart,
Bleeding in cold summer
All your promises,
All my dreams,
Torn by your intentions
Engraved by your lips
In the sunny summer,
With my dead muscles
Under the shadow of griefs
Laying down over sorrows
I am waiting for you sunshine
Coz you are the one
Who is still alive!!
PARAMVEER
-December,3.2008
Somethings still reside.
All your letters burning,
Laying near my dead body
Which is silently living.
All your deep memories
Inside a frozen heart,
Bleeding in cold summer
All your promises,
All my dreams,
Torn by your intentions
Engraved by your lips
In the sunny summer,
With my dead muscles
Under the shadow of griefs
Laying down over sorrows
I am waiting for you sunshine
Coz you are the one
Who is still alive!!
PARAMVEER
-December,3.2008
16 comments:
Hi Paramveer :)
Excellent peotry!
Lovely portrayal of emotions.
Many thanks for sharing.
Have a nice day :)
thats a beautifulk work!
is it a part of the period when u were very sad or is it a recent one, which has been recent in one of the passing by days, something about me tells me that the poet is sad personally, not creatively but on a hidden corner within his heart, may i ask why?
love u bro!
keep posting
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job dear!
Wishing you in advance "A Merry X'Mas and A Happy New Year''
hey
keep posting your poems...........
and thanks for your visit
My first time here! These are very intense lines and convey an extremely strong sense of emotion!
I'm hoping that this isnt a reflect of something current!
Do keep writing!
Cheers
Rakesh
Excellent peotry
My first time here,emotions are shown well with good flow of words.
Keep blogging!!
thanks to all for precious comments.
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very happy nu year and Christmas in advance...
plz keep visiting for regular posts after my xams(15 jan)....
you can go for my previous works which require ur suggestions a lot....i'l really appreciate .....
thanks for visiting
Dear Param
Wishing you a very happy and prosperous new year!
May the coming year bring to you, the best yet!
Good luck for the exams! Fare Well!
Warm Regards
Rakesh
what happened to you.are you enjoying your x'mas holidays.may you and your family celebrate a happy new year. keep posting ....
Its beautiful..:)
@ekam...thanks mam............love 2 see u here..
hey such a nice inferred thought..relly gr8..
hve a gud day..
@swagatika
thx a for visiting. i'l try to make such work again too.
very nice poem..very emotional
@ neha.....thx dear.keep visiting...
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