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Sunday, December 14, 2008

MY POETIC ACCENT #1:IN MY LONELY HOUSE

In my lonely house,
Somethings still reside.
All your letters burning,
Laying near my dead body
Which is silently living.
All your deep memories
Inside a frozen heart,
Bleeding in cold summer
All your promises,
All my dreams,
Torn by your intentions
Engraved by your lips

In the sunny summer,
With my dead muscles
Under the shadow of griefs
Laying down over sorrows
I am waiting for you sunshine
Coz you are the one
Who is still alive!!

PARAMVEER
-December,3.2008

16 comments:

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Paramveer :)

Excellent peotry!

Lovely portrayal of emotions.

Many thanks for sharing.

Have a nice day :)

PULKIT said...

thats a beautifulk work!
is it a part of the period when u were very sad or is it a recent one, which has been recent in one of the passing by days, something about me tells me that the poet is sad personally, not creatively but on a hidden corner within his heart, may i ask why?

love u bro!
keep posting

Femin Susan said...

Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job dear!

Wishing you in advance "A Merry X'Mas and A Happy New Year''

Femin Susan said...

hey
keep posting your poems...........
and thanks for your visit

Rakesh Vanamali said...

My first time here! These are very intense lines and convey an extremely strong sense of emotion!

I'm hoping that this isnt a reflect of something current!

Do keep writing!

Cheers

Rakesh

s4t4n said...

Excellent peotry

Ikshaa said...

My first time here,emotions are shown well with good flow of words.
Keep blogging!!

paramveer said...

thanks to all for precious comments.
a
very happy nu year and Christmas in advance...
plz keep visiting for regular posts after my xams(15 jan)....
you can go for my previous works which require ur suggestions a lot....i'l really appreciate .....

thanks for visiting

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Dear Param

Wishing you a very happy and prosperous new year!

May the coming year bring to you, the best yet!

Good luck for the exams! Fare Well!

Warm Regards

Rakesh

Femin Susan said...

what happened to you.are you enjoying your x'mas holidays.may you and your family celebrate a happy new year. keep posting ....

Ekam said...

Its beautiful..:)

paramveer said...

@ekam...thanks mam............love 2 see u here..

SWAGATIKA SARANGI said...

hey such a nice inferred thought..relly gr8..
hve a gud day..

paramveer said...

@swagatika
thx a for visiting. i'l try to make such work again too.

neha dhamija said...

very nice poem..very emotional

paramveer said...

@ neha.....thx dear.keep visiting...