tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post2679864848931632555..comments2011-07-15T22:27:04.303+05:30Comments on paramveer for life: स्मृतियों के आइनेParamveerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14053450077125015338noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post-57317466678300361872011-07-15T22:27:04.303+05:302011-07-15T22:27:04.303+05:30सुन्दर कविता परमवीर जी। किशोर हृदय की भावनाओं को श...सुन्दर कविता परमवीर जी। किशोर हृदय की भावनाओं को शब्दों में बखूबी पिरोया आपने।<br /><br />वैसे इस कविता के स्तर को देखते हुये आपसे और भी ऐसी सुन्दर कविताओं की उम्मीद है।<br /><br />----<br />श्रीश बेंजवाल, यमुनानगर<br />http://shrish.inePandithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15264688244278112743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post-40372698353040082762009-10-10T23:05:46.773+05:302009-10-10T23:05:46.773+05:30What a beautiful ending:
स्पर्श से वाणी के तुम्हार...What a beautiful ending:<br />स्पर्श से वाणी के तुम्हारी , वो स्मृतियाँ फिर हो आई |<br />सोकर यादों के सिरहाने पर , आंखें फिर भर आई ||<br />I liked the whole poem infact. Keep up the good work.The Literary Jewelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11421174480905206379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post-52342278967171329572009-07-31T17:03:00.585+05:302009-07-31T17:03:00.585+05:30oh my god Paramveer.. I didnt know you write such ...oh my god Paramveer.. I didnt know you write such good hindi poetry too.. god bless!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />Kajal(the pink orchid)Nainahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01044012895543016574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post-23019998434136090772009-06-18T18:31:05.722+05:302009-06-18T18:31:05.722+05:30I am not much fluent in Hindi. Any way congratulat...I am not much fluent in Hindi. Any way congratulation to you.Femin Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06261731875448040555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post-37448183799243450762009-05-25T15:08:24.496+05:302009-05-25T15:08:24.496+05:30i hv studied sanskrit in my early age so i got sm ...i hv studied sanskrit in my early age so i got sm better words of hindi....<br />i would be better blogger if start write in hindi....LOL...:)Paramveerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14053450077125015338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1100040582640462160.post-91621516115562473592009-05-25T07:30:21.841+05:302009-05-25T07:30:21.841+05:30beautifully written param!
thats pure hindi poetry...beautifully written param!<br />thats pure hindi poetry... with not urdu biased approach...<br />Whenever I tend to write in hindi I land up with an urdu mix compilation!<br />:DPULKIThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18145220843639184618noreply@blogger.com